Outline template:
a. Draw a reader to the hook.
I have never been living or at least staying somewhere alone for a long time. Moreover, I have never been to the other country alone, just by myself. But moment came and I had to go. I came to America June 9th, 2010.
b.Introduce characters and setting.
I met my boss at LAX in Los Angeles. I was supposed to work at the summer cafe with him, travelling around the whole West Coast. But everything seemed to be wrong with the very beginning.
II. Complication
a.Introduce and explore conflict.
Charlie, my boss took me to spa. It seemed very strange to me but I thought that's what they do in America. Hey! I have never been here before. Then he told me we're going to his home to Santa Barbara, however I old him that I had an arrangements for the room in Santa Monica. But he insisted on me going with him, he was my boss, so I had nothing to do but comply. I didn't like it at all.
b.Details
I came to his house. It was nice Californian house with bright sun and palm trees outside. I kind of like it. He had to cats (I hate cats): Pete and Repete (or Repeat, I don't know). He had only one bad and I was wondering where would I sleep. When he told me he would sleep in one bed with me, I was paralyzed. I could move. I was so scared alone in another country, I didn't know anybody or anything! Many more other details.
III. Resolution
a.Explain how the conflict is resolved.
I escaped with all my clothes took the taxi than the amtrak straight to Los Angeles. Here I was, alone, far away from home with no job and $300 in my pocket!
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